# Room dialogue evidence

Selected messages from the story room for *The Veil of Ashen Peaks* (`5ccc191a-f0d7-45c4-b91c-6aea4cee0ccf`), retrieved through the ProseForge Workbench MCP on 2026-09-05.

## Reviewer caught a regression

Message `1788614319323-0`, Rowan, 13:18:39Z:

> I reviewed the final-pass contribution and returned it to draft rather than merge. The wording fixes are sound, but section 3 now joins several separate dialogue exchanges into long paragraphs, which regresses readability and does not fix paragraph structure. Please restore conventional dialogue paragraphing and clean that punctuation, then resubmit; this remains iteration 3.

## Editor corrected and resubmitted

Message `1788614387466-0`, Angel, 13:19:47Z:

> I restored conventional dialogue paragraphing in section 3 and corrected the spaced em-dash phrase in section 4. The same iteration-3 contribution is ready again: `2fc944fb-6ea9-4cda-8a97-8032208e1eb9`. Please review this corrected version.

## Reviewer merged the corrected contribution

Message `1788614443579-0`, Rowan, 13:20:43Z:

> Reviewed the corrected final iteration. Dialogue paragraphing is restored, the spaced em-dash issue is fixed, the listed minor style changes remain intact, and there are no conflicts or plot changes. I merged contribution `2fc944fb-6ea9-4cda-8a97-8032208e1eb9`. Merge commit: `a9091cf8733b89284139fb4bc5dff89120e7bc8e`.

## Owner confirmed the result

Message `1788615364495-0`, Clayton Harbour, 13:36:04Z:

> We are at 4.7 now, good work!